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At the top of the screen where it says: "Install Windows Vista" I think it would sound better if it said: "Windows Vista Installer". The welcome screen text would sound much better if you wrote: "Welcome. Since this is your first time running "Windows Vista" - By Dolphin Project Team, you will need to install it in order to begin. Please Follow the steps that appear on your screen. Click on the next button to begin installation" In your license agreement, I see a few things that perhaps you would like to change. Where it says: "Make sure that this is not dolphin projects design......" I think what your trying to say is: "The windows vista theme, logo, icons, design, etc used in this portal are created by Microsoft corporation for there windows vista operating system and not by dolphin project team nor any of its affiliates." There's a slight misspelling where it says: "Coders who want's" want's is suppose to be just want. I think it would sound much better if you wrote: "Coders who want to feature dolphin project Teams "Windows vista" portal with there own, please contact bladefinor for details." Where it says: "You wont be allowed to change....." I think it would sound better if you wrote: "You are not allowed to copy, alter, delete, or otherwise change, either in whole or in part, anything from this portal without express consent from bladefinor. This includes dolphin project team members." The first item in the agreement can now be taken off because the last one pretty much says the same thing. :up:
P.s. I will be back with more suggestions if It help's you guys out.
P.P.s. dolphin project team ROCKS!
Last edited by DarkNusens; 06-18-2008 at 02:07 AM.
Reason: Im a perfectionist
At the top of the screen where it says: "Install Windows Vista" I think it would sound better if it said: "Windows Vista Installer". The welcome screen text would sound much better if you wrote: "Welcome. Since this is your first time running "Windows Vista" - By Dolphin Project Team, you will need to install it in order to begin. Please Follow the steps that appear on your screen. Click on the next button to begin installation" In your license agreement, I see a few things that perhaps you would like to change. Where it says: "Make sure that this is not dolphin projects design......" I think what your trying to say is: "The windows vista theme, logo, icons, design, etc used in this portal are created by Microsoft corporation for there windows vista operating system and not by dolphin project team nor any of its affiliates." There's a slight misspelling where it says: "Coders who want's" want's is suppose to be just want. I think it would sound much better if you wrote: "Coders who want to feature dolphin project Teams "Windows vista" portal with there own, please contact bladefinor for details." Where it says: "You wont be allowed to change....." I think it would sound better if you wrote: "You are not allowed to copy, alter, delete, or otherwise change, either in whole or in part, anything from this portal without express consent from bladefinor. This includes dolphin project team members." The first item in the agreement can now be taken off because the last one pretty much says the same thing. :up:
P.s. I will be back with more suggestions if It help's you guys out.
P.P.s. dolphin project team ROCKS!
THANKS!
I live in sweden so my english isn't the best :P
I will try to use your advices and hopefully you'll will see this in next beta
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